Monday 7 January 2013

Critique | Changes

Today I showed my work off to my classmates in order to get some feedback about possible improvements to be made. They were impressed with my work and complimented me on my typography choices and art style. 

Below is a list of improvements I have been suggested to work on for my book cover:

  • Add roots
  • Move both the title and blurb infront of the trees
  • Darken foreground/background to create perspective
  • Add more snow
  • Rear cover needs footprints
  • Book title on spine
  • Authors name etc on front cover
  • Create darkness at the end of the tree line
And here's the list that needs sorting on the poster:
  • Capitalisation of "out now!"
  • Change font
  • Add snow at the top
  • Add footprints

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