Here is a screenshot of my edited poster. I have removed the text from her hands, enlarged and aligned "Compression" to the centre. These changes were all suggested by my class mates during a critique of my work. Although I had a lot of changes suggested by them, I decided just to go with these because I feel happy that the rest of my design doesn't need changing.
Overall I'm really happy with this poster, although no doubt I'll have a couple more changes to make before handing it in. Probably my favourite feature of it is the suble Vimeo logo's throughout. They make the viewer subconsciously think about the brand, without having it as the focal point of my design.
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