Critique | Corrections

Today I displayed my work to my classmates in order to get some feedback on what they think of my design.
They gave me a lot of points to work upon for both of my posters, especially the first one. 
To do list:

• Larger bottom font/ different font

• Add softer texture to background V
• Move text from hands, make boxes into Jack in the box with text coming out of them

• Less bend on line underneath compression and centre "compression" in order to balance out loss of hand text.

• Rethink the colour of the dress highlights. No light source in my poster so the highlights are too bright. Possibly use slightly lighter brown than the dress colour to illustrate highlights.

For my second poster I have had problems selecting a colour palette. I want to include colours that reference Vimeo, but to do that I need blue, which completely fights against all the original colours of the poster because it is a cool colour. After discussing I've decided to:

•  Experiment with either Black/White/Red or continue with the Blue/White/Red colour schemes.
• Add far more detail on the clothing and faces
• Use the star shape at the edge of the poster to emulate the original