I found the feedback quite general as usual, and being last never helps. It was interesting to see how everyone reacted towards something I regarded as a completely rough piece as being nearly there. This has given me the confidence in what I have so far and the way its cut to the music makes me want to keep it this way.
To do:
Clean up sharp edges around out of focus objects, this will add a sense of finesse and tidy the images up considerably. The image of the school boy in the first photograph is the most successful so something like that is what to aim for.
Sort out the camera movement in the Mini Comp. At the moment the camera stops moving before the next scene folds in making for a clunky cut between the scenes.
Reshoot the train station scene. I need some smarter shoes and suit trousers on the actor to finish this off. Other than that I'm quite happy with it. The swinging bag got plenty of compliments. This made me very happy as its one of my favourite elements too!
Possibly shoot the interview scene?? I don't want to put extra work in but I did plan to do it in the first place; I think it will throw the timing of the song out which would be a shame.
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