Monday 4 November 2013

Feedback | Critique

Point made and changes to proceed with in mind:

  • Audio needs re recording, or levels need sorting out. 
  • Background gradient needs to be roughened in between the service scene
  • Text is a massive issue as people can't read it. A jerry can would be a decent fixture for the services scene.
  • Billboard at the start of "Happy" scene needs to have a different slogan on the end. 
  • Billboard at the end needs to either be centered or have the car lead up to it. 
The art style was consistently approved once again and I'm really happy about that. I will consider the changes above but I doubt i'll be able to change them all with the time I have. 

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