I've centralised the final billboard so it sits in the middle of the frame. All my classmates mentioned having this as the centrepiece of the last frame as it would have a stronger effect instead of being something slung into the corner of the scene. I am very thankful for the constructive feedback that has strengthened my animation.
Here's another change that was induced by my classmates. They didn't think that there should be repetition of the billboard so I've changed the text on the first one. Although I know the top text is going to be hard to read its not the main message of the animation. The biodiesel will be legible and that's what matters to me.
Finally I've added effects to the voiceover i recorded. The levels of the voiceover and the music were fighting each other so I added a volume effect and treble effect to help the voiceover stand out. I think its been successful.
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